Description:this week we went to camp it was so fun we did ten activities there was a water slide and we got to ride horses they were rite outside our cabin we could here them eating and farting.
The cabin were good I had my best friend and my cousin in my cabin so that was good
Feedback & Feedfordwards: it was good and you described nicely
But next time you could put some more pictures. -Louis
I'm not sure how you could survive on camp without teachers Hunter. It would be a pretty short camp otherwise... Your reflections were somewhat brief, I know you can do better.
ReplyDeleteThanks Troy I will try to make description longer
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